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Really pretty mood...I like it. Is there a way that I can download this?

Samuel-Mossa responds:

Sure! I can send you a google drive link if you'd like. It's also on spotify under the artist name "paper moth"

Epic.

Last part(05:42~)'s Brass synth (and pad I think?) sounds a bit messy, maybe less reverb and EQing would help. But other then that...it's really good. Love the subtle mysterious/suspense vibe.

ZmitteR responds:

Yeah I agree, that part could've been cleaner. Glad you like it!

The choir sounds a bit unclear, but this is still awesome.

JessieYun responds:

Hey Steve,
Long time no see. Yeah, I understand about the choir xD there's quite some minor flaws on this track since I had to finish it in 10 hours;;; but I'm glad you liked it overall!

Yeah, I thought I fixed it all but not on Newgrounds yet haha. I'll do that right now.

"and this is how the composer in me talked to myself through music." Just...wow. That's one awesome way to talk. Also, love the fact that your musics are keep getting better.
Especially love the clock sound in this one. Really sets up the mood and feels like it's emphasizing the passing of time. Please keep up your great works!

JessieYun responds:

Hey Steve,
Thank you very much for the comment, I greatly appreciate it!

Damn. Even better than the original one. Just awesome...!!

JessieYun responds:

Hey Steve,
Thank you very much! I’m very glad you enjoyed it!

Damn, this is so good for the 'warmup'...Melody and sound design is really good imo.

Seems like there are quite many clipping in the audio though, maybe adding some limiters or compressors would eliminate it. (Or maybe turn down reverb a little bit?)

Still, really nice song. Can't wait for more of your work!

Edit : Wow. It got even better... :0

JessieYun responds:

Hey Steve,
Thank you very much for the comment, I’m glad you enjoyed it! Hmmm, I haven’t almost added the reverb, and I made some limitations to the track... I’ll take a look at this problem soon. Thanks a lot for mentioning some suggestions!

ETA : I've replaced the track! Hope this sounds better for you!

Love the track's whole mood, especially all those reversed sounds in the background.

DaMastrofSkiTsees responds:

Thanks so much for that. My biggest focus on this track was the reversed sounds and bass :^)

"Im a beginner music producer i think lol. im succ at mixing at mastering."
No, not at all, man......This is so well made...(also kinda better than me i guess?)

Okay, I mean, cutting the drop's chords' treble a little bit could make it sound better, but everything else is just so good!

Another-Time responds:

Thx! i appreciate your feedback <3

To me, not fast enough 8)

But seriously tho, the drop is kinda too good to be made in 4 hours...

Zelgeon responds:

lmao thx bro xd
though drop is literally just kickspam, what took me more time to do was the kick which i made from scratch, the arrangement of the drop took me about 40 minutes haha

Seriously, iPhone must be pretty damn good for music making.....Nice work!
Also your voice recording fits really well in the song.

JessieYun responds:

Hey Steve,

Thanks a lot for the comment! I'm glad you like the track.
And thank you! I was bit worried since I'm not a good singer haha. Worth a shot, I guess.

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